Book Final Edit!

I think I am done with my book. If anyone sees any mistakes, if anything is not clear to you, if you see any technical errors or have any ideas for improvement please do share!! Suggestions are completely welcomed and encouraged.
Here are the screenshots in order just to make it easier, but I will also include a dropbox link.
Thank you for any input!

https://www.dropbox.com/home

Did ya miss me?

Well hello,
I haven't written anything since the first two weeks of class. I bit off way more than I could chew this semester, and this is one of the many things that have been put on the back burner. The time is 2:20 am on a Friday (...Saturday) and I am sitting in Steak N Shake by myself doing homework; something that has become a late night ritual for me. This is what my life has turned into...
I just put my final touches on my book. I will load a dropbox link as soon as I clear out enough space in there. My mom decided she wanted to see my book, which I have been completely hiding from her, hoping it would not come down to this moment. Wish me luck with that conversation/argument.
I suppose I am just procrastinating my 2 papers I have to write tonight so I must get back to it.
Tata for now.